by PygmyPuff Jun 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Looking through the eyes of a looking glass. |
The looking glass can't see everything. |
Great!!! |
by Stabbylou
Wow, short but powerful, it delivers the frustration and hurt so well that the reader is left wanting to know more. A fantastic write again 5/5 |
by Darien
I thought it was alright. You ended two sentences with 'know', so it ruined the little flow! haha love my rhymes :P |
by Stephanie
Wow, very deep and emotional! I like it a lot! Keep up the good work! 5/5 |