Mya, that was very well written. I liked the emotion you put towards it. I also liked the depth and insight. That poem can mean two different things. Actually fighting a war, or fighting life, which can be said to be a war. I loved it. Nice work.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating:4.5/5

Hey this is cool krissy.... I really like the effort and work you put into this... I will eventually get to rating and commenting on ALL your poems but bear with me!

A vivid picture of a world seen through the eyes of pain. Everyone sees the world diferently.

Very intense... you see I took from it that someone is trying to fix things in the world, and they put much into it and ppls lives, but never get anything in return for it... its hard working on ppl when they never even realise you are there, it makes you want to quit!! Really beauitful and intensley written. Adored it!!
Godbless
Sammib

Not my kind of thing but its kool
xx

Mya, my loser best friend, i love this. remember, u can talk to me whenever. my email's gumbieflashcrash@aol.com this is one of ur best, and i love it all.