by Ben Jun 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When I look into your eyes, |
Sweet and sad, my favorite. The rhyming, at times, seemed forced, but otherwise it was good. You seem to be a rather goopy mess over this chick. I hope things go for the best. Don't give up hope. I'm here for you, always hun. Take good care of yourself. xx |
by Natalie
Now when I close my eyes, |
by Dre4meR
The emotions you expressed was amazing...this poem is outstanding |