The emotions you expressed was amazing...this poem is outstanding

Now when I close my eyes,
It's you that I see.
Like a movie played in my mind,
I know you can set me free.
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I loved that part. This was such a great write. So much emotion and it was written beautifuly. Keep it up! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Sweet and sad, my favorite. The rhyming, at times, seemed forced, but otherwise it was good. You seem to be a rather goopy mess over this chick. I hope things go for the best. Don't give up hope. I'm here for you, always hun. Take good care of yourself. xx

Much much love,
- -SJGxx