HEY YOU NEED to work on it a little more sorry im not trying to be mean

Not bad...love is a crazy thing to write about...trust me...ive been doing it for awhile but its good to say what you want about love...so yea...nice job..lay...

matt

This has alot of meaning to it...

great and hilarious stanza

*It's Ok to kiss a fool.
It's ok to let a fool kiss you.
But NEVER let a KISS FOOL you.*

I laughed when I read that. Keep it up kid