Comments : We Flash Across The Universe

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I can see the beauty of you.
    Your dance is so true.
    My telescope camera shutters.
    My heart dances and flutters.

    Watching you watching me.
    Dancing with you; dancing with me.
    You fill my poetry with verse,
    We flash across the universe.
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    I l.o.v.e.d those two stanza's. This poem was WOW. It was really good. Keep it up! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.