WOW thats amazing. i love it. i can reltate to the cutting. its sad but its a great poem. keep ur head up and keep on writing. ur rele good.. 5/5
chek out some of my poems if u wana

angie

I liked the flow of the poem and the ending. I think this poem did a better job of being descriptive about what led to what and why, though I'm not sure I understand why/how he was driven away by the cutting. In any case, the emotions were very strong, and I liked the repitition of 'why', it seemed very real.