This poem is really good and i love what words you used 2 describe how your feeling..love it!

I liked the first stanza the best.

'Alone today, alone.
Forgive her, forgive.
Stop the pain, stop.
Live. Let us live'

it just seemed so

perfect. loved teh poem. oneof your best yet

Ruby

Pretty good. you've written better. still, well done, and congrats. i can't write anymore poems, i've lost all inspiration. lol
-Suz