by GretaInsideOut Jun 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Take me to you. |
Wow, yet another beautiful poem lol I love this one too (b'.')b |
by JaMeS
Aww thats a really great poem babe seriously a really nice piece of writing the rhyming wasnt forced the meaning behind it all spot on :) |
by Ben
It could be longer, but its good. i would have described more what was seen in the "eyes". but thats just me. good work though, keep it up. |