by Serenical Darkness Jun 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As time passes, we're betrayed by fate, |
by Aussie
WOW!! ur poems get mor amazing each poem. this is sadly true. keep writing:) |
Wow!!! that was amazing.......Have you ever thought about turning your poems into songs....i think this poem would make an awesome song :).....you are a fantastic writer keep it up :) |
Yet another amazing poem...though I think I like this one best out of the ones I have read! I'm glad to have the chance to read your work, you have so much talent, keep writing and I will keep reading...and thanks for all the comments you've left on mine!! |
by Ashley Ann
You are really talented! :D it sounds like you actually went through this...I hope not because no one deserves pain like that...Awesome poem though! 5/5 |
by leah
O Jeremy that was beautiful, you are truely talented. I cant believe I actually get to talk to you, you are amazing ! |