O Jeremy that was beautiful, you are truely talented. I cant believe I actually get to talk to you, you are amazing !

You are really talented! :D it sounds like you actually went through this...I hope not because no one deserves pain like that...Awesome poem though! 5/5

Yet another amazing poem...though I think I like this one best out of the ones I have read! I'm glad to have the chance to read your work, you have so much talent, keep writing and I will keep reading...and thanks for all the comments you've left on mine!!

Wow!!! that was amazing.......Have you ever thought about turning your poems into songs....i think this poem would make an awesome song :).....you are a fantastic writer keep it up :)
Danielle

WOW!! ur poems get mor amazing each poem. this is sadly true. keep writing:)