by Tess Beautifully Broken Jun 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
It pains her to see him, |
by Jessica
Awwww.. that is soo adorable! i just find that it should end at the 11th stanza.. i think the rest ruins it a bit.. but still an excellent write! the rhymes worked well and there was just so much emotion.. wonderful poem! 5/5 |