WOW. These lyrics were awesome. As I was reading them, I had an awesome beat in my head. The meaning behind it was also very good. I loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Wow, I loved these lyrics.They were so heartfelt and true, I understand so well what you mean with these lines...I think it would make a wonderful song if you found the music.I loved it! Keep writing like that! 5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I powerful and personal message with these lyrics. I wish I could hear it to music to get a better idea of the lyrics, but sadly this site doesn't have a way to do that. Do you write the music, or just the lyrics to it. Keep writing and expressing your sincere ldeas and emotions.

-Tainted Miko