by Jennifer Jun 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My hearts full of pain, eyes full of tears, sleep full of nightmares, I'm fighting all my fears, wrists are left bloody, hands are left cold, tears are lifting unwept, until i grow old, feeling so unwanted, feeling so depressed, feeling so damn tired, |
by Saving Grace
This was really sad. And although i didnt liek this one as much as your others, it was good. You did a great job at expressing yourself here, which is really excellent. But theres just somthing that doesnt seem right in my opinion. 4/5 |
Aww this is vair goo 5/5 from me =] |
by uponfairywings
Beautiful poem I dont like the GD word but that doesnt matter it's still an awesome poem! |