by Jennifer Jun 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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My hearts full of pain, eyes full of tears, sleep full of nightmares, I'm fighting all my fears, wrists are left bloody, hands are left cold, tears are lifting unwept, until i grow old, feeling so unwanted, feeling so depressed, feeling so damn tired, |
by Saving Grace
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This was really sad. And although i didnt liek this one as much as your others, it was good. You did a great job at expressing yourself here, which is really excellent. But theres just somthing that doesnt seem right in my opinion. 4/5 |
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Aww this is vair goo 5/5 from me =] |
by uponfairywings
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Beautiful poem I dont like the GD word but that doesnt matter it's still an awesome poem! |