With you

by Evil love   Jun 8, 2006


When you hold me close
It's like the world melts away
I don't have to worry
About anything in life
About the mistakes I've made
That I will eventually have to fix
About things i am dreading to happen
it's all very faint in my mind
And when you kiss me
it goes away completely
I don't think about my life
How i feel different in the world
i don't have to think about anything
It's just you and me
I don't think you will ever
Understand how you make me feel
With you i am a completely different person
With you I'm normal
You don't make me feel different
When you hold me
It seems as if you'll never let go
When I'm at your side
I don't have to think about
How i shouldn't be with you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dimari

    Been there. Very good. Have you ever seen the movie, Never-ending Story, which is for children, but boy, that is a movie full of things everyone should pay attention to. I was reading your profile and thought maybe, if you had not seen the original, you might like to:) Keep up the good work and remember, you can make it happen!

  • 18 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Wikkid poem Ma
    keep it up
    : ) ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    That's sweet. I liked this poem the most! I love it when you're with someone and they can make everything feel so good. You did a good job on this poem, Really well done. Keep up the great work!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    This was good... very cute... somewhat general though... try to use bigger words or more comparisons and symbols to create a more dramatic image... someone told me this for my poems, and they seemed to get better... it improved my writing... keep up the good work!

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