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by TornTears Jun 8, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
Wounded by your words And covered in your lies As blood seeps down my sleeve And tears fall from my eyes Lying here in tears Knowing you'll never see me cry Lying here in pain Knowing you'll never even try Wrapped in crimson threads Choking my life's last breath Closing my eyes to your love And opening them to death Trying just one last time To cover up my mistake Trying one last time to show you My love was never fake Trapped inside insanity Screaming out for your cure Wishing and hoping just for once Your love would be true and pure Slipping away into darkness My hurt driving me insane As every word I remember you saying Causes another stab of pain
by Dannielle
I love this poem, very good =) keep the good work up xXx
by Kayd
Wonderful use of rhyme, and there is a rhythem. Wonderful overall too, keep it up!