Beautiful. There is not much I could say about this poem except that it was comforting and a pleasure to read. Keep it up!

I don't know.. maybe an inspirational poem.. It says to me that nature has it's way, and if it can survive, the love you display can too.. I don't know.. Maybe Seyella is right, but I re-read this about 3 times before I placed this opinion on it.. it is love, but it is nature, and it is hope, for you use the last line in such an enormous way, that after everything, there is still @here and now'.. I love this, wherever you put it. :-) xx

This is a really good poem with a great message behind it, I like the way you have your poem set, and the way you're talking to the moon.

Sway and sing your heart out
for all that you're worth;
smile for the orb
and her lunar rebirth--
loosen your heartstrings,
fill them with mirth--
stand up, and take my hand.

^^^^^^^^that one I really liked. good job

Wow.. this was good.. it was so metaphorical and the language you used was beautiful.. the rhymes all worked and the poem flowed nicely.. excellent write, it made me feel quite tingly insidee.. 5/5

Put it under funny/humorous poetry...

Well written, and filled with passion. You have a brilliant mind Sean. Good luck with your writing, and may you one day be recognized for your remarkable talent!

I love your poetrys.It's all so well written.Whoever or whatever had inspired you to write such beautiful poetrys?You are a very natural poet full of passions.Keep up the good work.I will be looking forward to all your other poems. (:

-Rainbow

Wow thats just beautiful...thanks for your advice i already edited it. great poem its so like detailed. i wish i had so much talent!! 5/5!

xoxo
Diana

I love it. Keep writing. Check out mine to please.

Oh my gosh! This poem was really good! You're an amazing poet! Keep up the good work! 5/5

-Stephanie-

Your vocab is one again amazing but gives us another glance as your strong imagery such as:
and her lunar rebirth
[Beautiful]
loosen your heartstrings,
[Stunning]
carries the blossoms away,
[Emotional line that gives a sense of touch as well as sight]

Great cosmic flow with an oustanding format

Wow, ok. This is amazing...

"loosen your heartstrings,
fill them with mirth--"

I often feel exactly like this when I look at the moon, or rather, this is what I feel like doing, but could not find the words to express or how to do it.

I LOVE this poem. I wouldn't change a thing.

This is a lovely poem beautiful pictures came to my mind as i read it, your descriptions were great. again, exellent poem xxALLYxx

I really liked this. very light hearted and open!!!! 5/5

Aww wow. That was so sweet! It had really good imagry, And even though it wasn't that long, It was still good! I really liked these lines:
"Take my hand so we may dance;
the dance of the ancients,
a dance of romance."

Awesome job!! 5/5

`Taleee xx

A beautiful and gentle poem. I liked the flow of the first stanza, it was flawless, perfect, it rolled of my tongue. The last line of the final stanza touched me too, very romantic.
Sweet write anyway, keep it up.

I loved the mystic twilight feel I got from this poem. I'm an avid dancer so I guess its naturally that this stanza was to me, particularly poignant.

Take my hand so we may dance;
the dance of the ancients,
a dance of romance.
My soul asks a question
you answer with a glance:
tonight belongs to the moon

My only possible critque is that I don'e really like how the last line of the first verse ended with sway and the first line of the second verse started with sway, I'm guessing that its intentional though and is more a matter of personal taste ^_^

A wonderful flowing poem from start to finish, I also enjoyed the diction, new ideas and phrases instead of the cliche love poems. A beautiful write

Great write. Talent seeping from your pores. loved the lines and the way they flowed. Your wording was especially good.

Nice poem