Even this unfair score

by Tripp   Jun 8, 2006


Some days I don't see the point in trying anymore...read, comment, and tell me what you think

I'm left here, drowning in my sorrows
wondering why, I should live for tomorrow
all I have left, is one girl in my life
all I have left, is this girl, saving me from a knife

Words can cut me deep, and hurt me
looks can tear me apart, they think it's funny
I never did anything, to deserve any of this
I never did anything, to be dragged through this piss

There's nothing I can do, I'm hopeless
can't even run, these kids are merciless
each lived day, is a day of regret
each day, is a day I wish I could forget

I'm starting to lose all hope in life
I'm starting to see, all this strife
I used to think this would change
but it hasn't this is a life deranged

These attacks come, unprovoked,
and these ropes, I wish could have choked
me, on the first attempt, I don't wanna try anymore
I'm done trying, done trying to even this unfair score

Lies and threats, pervade my every step and look
I'm withdrawn and fearful, each stranger is a crook
I can't trust anyone now, except perhaps Becky
and even her, she can't begin to actually truly see

The shit that I go through, day after day
but perhaps, tomorrow, I just may
not wake up, stroke of midnight, commit suicide
and perhaps be relieved, of all the tears I've cried

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  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    It was truely sad. Some of it didn't fit together, as of some of the lines, especially with some of the forced rhyming. But overall, I thought it was great. Some of the expressions in there were magnificent, and it went really deep to show how some people think this way, how alot of people can relate! It was sorrowful. Stick in there. Even if you don't have control over some things in your life... you have control over where you are going, and it doesn't have to be there. 4/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I feel your pain and its good that you're sharing it. I am sry all this is happening to you. But you're right you have becky and you have God and all ur P&Q friends. THis was a vry deep poem one of ur top 5.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    This sounds ALOT like what he was telling me a few days ago...im saving him.
    Lies and threats, pervade my every step and look
    I'm withdrawn and fearful, each stranger is a crook
    I can't trust anyone now, except perhaps Becky
    and even her, she can't begin to actually truly see
    ^ is my fave stanza, and i love the entire thing in general!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    U hav an amazing knack for writing dark sad poems....that was grrt...i loved it...it seems as if no one cares...like life has no hope, u are all alone and stuck in a hell hole u cant dig urself out of....trust me i kno that feeling...i am experiencing that feeling....
    love ya lots,
    sore

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