Unbelievable

by NotreDameDon287   Jun 8, 2006


You are unbelievable
my love for you
is unbelievable
i love you
more and more
everyday it grows
more and more
i love you more
than i did before
you're unbelievable
that is true
i hope yours is too
you are unbelievable
forever truly

(C) Copyright 2006-2007 by john O'Shea

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  • 17 years ago

    by damaris avila

    Hey thiis ones really good, unbelievable

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    You have a way with words. . .just a suggestion here but with the way you are at expressing what you feel. . .i would put your talent to work and try to rhyme a lil. . .it's a real turn on for the ladies and it's really alot easier! lol i'm not trying to be mean or anything, just giving some advice...sorry if you get mad :) but your totally good at what you do 5/5! :D
    thanks for the comment on mine
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    So sweet poem unbelievable!!!

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