So sweet poem unbelievable!!!

You have a way with words. . .just a suggestion here but with the way you are at expressing what you feel. . .i would put your talent to work and try to rhyme a lil. . .it's a real turn on for the ladies and it's really alot easier! lol i'm not trying to be mean or anything, just giving some advice...sorry if you get mad :) but your totally good at what you do 5/5! :D
thanks for the comment on mine
~*~Amber~*~

Hey thiis ones really good, unbelievable