I love this poem! it really flows... it's intimidating... good job... keep up the good work, you've got a good start to some real works of art!

Very dark! And, Very good. You chose great wording for this, Since it's pretty small. You've done a great job! I enjoyed reading it! =) Keep it up. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow!!
i lvoe this poems so much so sad nd full of depression i lvoe it and ur poems i cant wait to read more xoxroxyxox

This is cool....
i like the meaning...
or what i think you mean by it...
Well keep up the good work!