Thats amazing, i love you style. i've never seen it done like that. it was like i was reading a short story but it rhymed...but yeah everything was pretty much right on with the flow and all of that..5/5

Very good hun! 5 xox

"Call for your master to come save your soul
But sins aren't forgiven until you give back what you stole "

i love that part.. a few lines but it means so much .. you got potential hun...

xo c;

Amazing poem- loved the rhyme and it flowed nicely-keep writing uv got talent!