This is the story of a girl named jordan

by Hey Brittknee   Jun 8, 2006


This is the story of a girl:

Her mom never loved her and told her she should die
This girl was even starting to feel the hurt before she was five
Her step father ripped her baby pictures and said she shouldn't have been born
No one ever knew how bad this girl was torn
She was broken and she was hurt
Everyone she knew made her feel like dirt

She was caught in one of California's gangs
Her head was so confused and the feelings rang
She cut herself because she had nothing left to do
She had nothing left because she had nothing to prove
She was raped she was torn and she was falling apart
And not only that she had a condition with her heart

She had been suicidal for who knows how many years
But then she found a friend who took away all her fears
I am that friend and ill love her forever
Her name is Jordan and my name is Brittany and I am glad we're together

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean

    Beautiful convergence, i think the last two lines lose out a bit in the poem, but everything else reads beautifully with no need for imagery as everythings directly put.

    it's a good poem =)

  • 18 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Awsomeness (its means beyond awsome and cool) i loved it it was WAY better than my one about Jordan it sucks this rocks.

    ~king drske

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Reach.For.The.Stars*~

    I liked it its really cool how u put it together! keep it up!

    stephany...
    Thanx for the commento