by Hey Brittknee Jun 8, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
This is the story of a girl: |
by Sean
Beautiful convergence, i think the last two lines lose out a bit in the poem, but everything else reads beautifully with no need for imagery as everythings directly put. |
Awsomeness (its means beyond awsome and cool) i loved it it was WAY better than my one about Jordan it sucks this rocks. |
I liked it its really cool how u put it together! keep it up! |