I liked it its really cool how u put it together! keep it up!

stephany...
Thanx for the commento

Awsomeness (its means beyond awsome and cool) i loved it it was WAY better than my one about Jordan it sucks this rocks.

~king drske

Beautiful convergence, i think the last two lines lose out a bit in the poem, but everything else reads beautifully with no need for imagery as everythings directly put.

it's a good poem =)