by ♥kazza♥ Jun 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
It seems like so much longer |
by Cameron
I love the way u write if you get time will you please check me out. |
by Jessica
Aww.. another very sweet poem.. the flow worked and so do most of your rhymes.. the descriptions could be made more detailed.. but i think that is just your style of writing : very simple.. nice job! 4/5 |
by Dre4meR
That was so lovely and wonderful...:) |
Great poem- loved the last two lines! |
Lovely touching poem, well done 5/5 |