The World Stands Still

by Evil love   Jun 9, 2006


Every day
At sunset
It seems as if
The world stands still
There's not a ripple in the water
Not a leaf moves
The wind ceases
Everything is silent
And unmoving
For a few seconds
Time stops
To let you appreciate nature
For what it is
Some people notice it
Some don't
like a rich man
crooning over his expensive house
or a young man
admiring his new car
Some don't even bother to
admire the sunset
But some do
some people
like me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice poem. I love watching the sunset, And rise lol. It's very pretty. You've done a great job on this piece. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    I love this poem... you described the sunset so vividly... it really painted a picture in my head... good use of imagery... thanks for the comments and keep up the good work!