Great poem, well written.
Keep it up 5/5

Love CAN be a reality. But I do like how you think. You put things into perspective for me. Thanx! =)

Very True

Wow.. that was.... so deep. omg. every poem that i've read from you, all the words and lines you created all came from your heart. i wish i can write like you and pls don't do what other people do. they lie just to kiss butt. lol.. but wow... this poem and i am sure the rest are beautifully written, with a nice flow and rhythm to them. AGain.... great poem. you've expresses so much in words yet we know there's more. 5/5

* just at this moment i am going to submit a poem that i was making while i was reading your poems... don't worry i don't copy other people lines.. it's sort of like my own story as well... pls read it.

This is really nice! good write! keep up the good work!
god bless