My Last Night

by xFadedxForeverx   Jun 9, 2006


I had the razor next lying next to me.
Telling myself to turn away.
I want to stop, to be free.
But to get rid of pain, this is my only way.

I cant take this life anymore.
To many tears, the weight of being broken inside.
I grab the razor off of the floor.
This had been my escape everytime I cried.

I look at my wrist, at every single scar.
Each had a story of lonelyness and pain.
An escape is what they are.
Every time I need to get away, I grab the razor again.

I close my eyes and grasp it in my hand
1,2, 3 I whisper then I clench my fist.
My suside note next to me, just like I planned.
Soon this will be over, I wont exist.

Goodbye to my so called friends.
You'll never understand why.
They said happiness never ends...
Well thats just one big lie.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Julie

    Heyy babe!!!
    [[yahh its me]] =] lol
    that poem is amazing, no doubt. & its really scary & sad.....esp. concidering that is what i am going through right now =[
    [[i bet youa re trying to get a message out to me, i can tell]] =] you worrie so much, but i can understand why
    somedays i just dont know what to do with myself! =[
    well, amazing job hunn!!!
    i love you TONS

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    Hey great poem i know how you feel but things will get better believe me ok two tumbs up

  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Its a really good poem to me because I can so imagine myself in this poem

    Tony :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Hey, just wanted to say good job. Maybe dont use so many commas, it takes away from the poem. I know how your feeling. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I hope you aren't really planning on doing this. i used to feel this way, but now i have gotten better...things can and will get better, you just have to give life that chance. neways 5/5. i loved it.

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