Comments : My Last Night

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I hope you aren't really planning on doing this. i used to feel this way, but now i have gotten better...things can and will get better, you just have to give life that chance. neways 5/5. i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Hey, just wanted to say good job. Maybe dont use so many commas, it takes away from the poem. I know how your feeling. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Its a really good poem to me because I can so imagine myself in this poem

    Tony :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    Hey great poem i know how you feel but things will get better believe me ok two tumbs up

  • 18 years ago

    by Julie

    Heyy babe!!!
    [[yahh its me]] =] lol
    that poem is amazing, no doubt. & its really scary & sad.....esp. concidering that is what i am going through right now =[
    [[i bet youa re trying to get a message out to me, i can tell]] =] you worrie so much, but i can understand why
    somedays i just dont know what to do with myself! =[
    well, amazing job hunn!!!
    i love you TONS