by CHOKE
I hope you aren't really planning on doing this. i used to feel this way, but now i have gotten better...things can and will get better, you just have to give life that chance. neways 5/5. i loved it. |
by ENTROPY
Hey, just wanted to say good job. Maybe dont use so many commas, it takes away from the poem. I know how your feeling. keep writing |
by xxMagioxx
Its a really good poem to me because I can so imagine myself in this poem |
by lisa
Hey great poem i know how you feel but things will get better believe me ok two tumbs up |
by Julie
Heyy babe!!! |