You point is very clear and i can understand what you're saying and the love you put in it. but the format of the poem could use some work. 4/5

Thnks for the comment i was soo pi**ed it was like a day or to ago and u can really write well to i love this poem yah the guy broke up with me because people were telling him im a wh**e

This was cute nice job

Thnks for elling me i have talent i want and hope to be able to do this for a career but u never no wats gunna happen but yah ur a really talented writer to

Okay, this is different, but it is a decient write.