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by *sheLby Jun 9, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
I can't read your lies the lines you write make me think you see me in your sight again, you lie from that beautiful mouth and now i undress you tell me lies as your tongue goes down my throat you make me scream tell me again scream "you're a wh**e\" "i'm only with you .. to score"
by Wings Of Flames
It was ok... the rhythm broke for me but. it had a prety obscure storyline so it doesnt score vbery high in my mind. each to their own i guess. if you didnt want my comment you wouldnt have posted the poem. ~Em