That night i`ll always remember...

by kelS;   Jun 9, 2006


She woke up, and said "what have I done?"
She could not remember her night,
Her tummy rumbled.
She did not feel right.

As she looked around the room,
She saw that there were white stains on the bed,
As she looked at them closer,
She saw that it was all spread.

She immediately turned over.
And puked in horror,
What has happened?
Maybe it was just an error.

She called her best friend,
Asked about the night,
She could not help but scream,
She was in such fright.

She told her about the day,
She will be right over she said.
We got some tests,
And by the end we knew she was dead.

she had to tell him,
He said I did not do anything, it was all you,
My life was over,
Just because of some stupid screw.

Her family freaked,
She could not help but to shout.
They kept telling her how she was stupid,
So she got kicked out.

She moved in with a friend,
She got a job and dropped out of school,
Which She knew She had to do,
Her life was so cruel.

Nine months later,
Her little girl came,
She was so happy,
She felt no little bit of shame.

Now that Shes older,
Shes glad she kept with it,
Other wise she would not have her girl,
Now Her goal is: just commit.

THiss isn`t a Truee storyy about me, about my cousin.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I was gonna ask if it was a true story!
    thats insane that it actually happened!
    I like poems that are true!
    good job rhyming too.
    I don't have much advice because there is basically nothing wrong with it.
    keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a really good poem, if you want to improve it you can add more details about your feelings back then.
    I liked the way you described the situation, it was very clear what you meant, but you didn't just say: I was pregnant...you described what happened, and that's pretty cool.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that's really sad, i really liked it!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Excellent! the story of my life!!!! It was really good the flow was a little iffy everynow and then but I THOUGT it was great

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This is a pretty good poem, the flow wasn't that great. Some of your lines were longer than others. The rhymes were alright, they seem cheap though, like it was expected. But it's a good write for a younger writer. Keep on trying. Glad you used your creative mind to write this one, and not have it be true.

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