That was very good i like how the first and last paragraphs are similar i give you a 5/5. keep it up bye
tiffany

Wow this was amazing. i love this poem. it has good flow.. its amazing.. i can relate to this.. keep on writing cuz ur rele talented.. 5/5
angie-

Awesome poem, I can so relate... Good job

Tony :) keep on writting, plz look at some of my poems plz, I know your a better writter but I am trying to get better :)