Golden Hill

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 9, 2006


Stars are winking presence,
As I walk along this road,
I believe existence is a gift,
But contains a countless load,

The moon shimmering a kiss,
I wished for another time,
I thought and cried a tear,
Rememberance of your crime,

A kiss it was you took,
Stole from me and gave away,
A night for beloved,
IS haunting every day,

Forgiveness is a treasure,
With strings webbed to and fro,
Meaning is of nothing,
When theres nothing left to show,

Listen to my heartbeat,
As it slows to a fainted stop,
I looked across the stilled lake,
And saw falling crystals drop,

I wish upon a star,
Each and everyday,
Please oh god don't let me,
Please don't let us fray,

Cold and heartless blows,
Icicles from the heart,
It is not just me,
But all who fall apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    After reading this again i've changed my mind, its great. it's just because i wasn't really concentrating. i'm sorry. had alot on my mind a gave you a bad review. my favorite stanza was the first because of it's truth. life does have a counless load. sorry again love. this is great.

    Brad

    P.S. read my poems 'Satan's Statement', 'East London' and 'The Reaching Outcast'. the first two i think you'll just like, well, i hope, but 'The Reaching Outcast' is i think is relevent to you because you said in one of your comments to me that you don't have friends, or something to that affect.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Gooooood. love ya Em. lol. ttyl
    -suz

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    An exquisite poem. as usual, your use of imagry was perfect.

    teh rhyming was great, and the flow was perfect. a wonderful poem

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was okay, but i know how much better you can write, so by your standereds, its not the best, but its okay.
    sorry to be so blunt, and i'm sorry if i seem heartless.

    Brad

    P.S. hey, you could always just 'rubbish' my poems, they're crap enough now a days

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