This was okay, but i know how much better you can write, so by your standereds, its not the best, but its okay.
sorry to be so blunt, and i'm sorry if i seem heartless.

Brad

P.S. hey, you could always just 'rubbish' my poems, they're crap enough now a days

An exquisite poem. as usual, your use of imagry was perfect.

teh rhyming was great, and the flow was perfect. a wonderful poem

Ruby

Gooooood. love ya Em. lol. ttyl
-suz

After reading this again i've changed my mind, its great. it's just because i wasn't really concentrating. i'm sorry. had alot on my mind a gave you a bad review. my favorite stanza was the first because of it's truth. life does have a counless load. sorry again love. this is great.

Brad

P.S. read my poems 'Satan's Statement', 'East London' and 'The Reaching Outcast'. the first two i think you'll just like, well, i hope, but 'The Reaching Outcast' is i think is relevent to you because you said in one of your comments to me that you don't have friends, or something to that affect.