That was a very good poem/prayer. It's always hard to turn to God when there are other people around. Sometimes you get so caught up in life, we forget to acknowledge him. This was a great prayer. Thanks for a great read.

Loved it. 5/5
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Aww hunni that was a good one i loved it

That was sooo great! great prayer! loved this poem! 5/5

Great poem, prayer i loved it well done

Great prayer/poem... i liked it alot,... great work!!

kazza

Good poem, i like the prayer thing.

Aww very sincere, loved it.

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Super work. Very strong emotion and well written too. Good job.
I think when you wrote 'you' if should have been 'You'.

Aww that was really nice. I felt it strong and powerful with deep emotion. I could relate to such a prayer and work! Keep up your great job! 5/5

I loved this. Trust me I know how you feel.. I could relate to practically every line in this poem and it's one of the most horrible feelings, but God is always there.. even if it seems He isn't.. I love the emotion in this poem. The flow and everything was really good. Keep it up!
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

I loved the way it was not yet clear it was god you were writing about until the end.

some lines seemed to rhyme, but others not. a bit confusing.

a very sweet poem

Ruby

This is by far my favorite. Nothing special. BUt a strong message. And Im sure everyone that is a beleive can relate. Very good I love it. We need more about our Faith in God.

God Bless

-CHris

Great! we all need to turn to God always... even though we are driftin away... cos he would help us always...

loved the poem! keep it up!

It still captures a deep essence even while it's short. There's a bit of desperation for God to listen, and to take your words. I liked the speaker's voice in the poem, and maybe it's personal? It was very well done, kudos.