My Suicide...

by Mess Of A Dreamer   Jun 9, 2006


Cut my wrist

cut it deep

cut my wrist and make it bleed.

shoot my head

with a gun

shoot my head

until life's done.

swallow pills

swallow more

swallow pills

alive no more.

stab my heart

with a knife

stab my heart

and take my life.

drink some bleach

tear me up inside

drink some bleach

and then i die.

i cut my wrists

to hide what's inside

i cut my wrists

because i cry.

i shoot myself

because i cried

i shoot myself

because he lied.

I take the pills

because no one's there

i take the pills

wishing someone cared.

I stab my heart

because he's gone

i stab my heart

wishing life was done.

i drink the bleach

to kill the pain

i drink the bleach

to end a life lived in vain.

It's not supposed to be like I did each one...its supposed to be WHY i would or did each one...

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  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I have felt this and lived it sadness my friend i truly feel for you

  • 15 years ago

    by Cierra

    I lioke this poem it was well put together

    ~Cierra Brent~

  • 18 years ago

    by My tormented little heart

    I really like this poem. When i was in suicide rehab I met a kid who actually drank toilet bowl cleaner instead of bleach. It tore up his insides and literally about killed him. This poem pierces my heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Its so deep and sad.. but its good. ur very talented. im sorry u feel like that. thats not a good feeling i kno.. but keep ur head up. keep on writing ur rele good. i like it.. 5/5
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Red

    Thats really sad, sorry that you felt that way