by Darien
So much hatred in our world, and it's unexplained. I really would like to know 'Why?'.. I don't think we can ever understand human nature. People blame it on many things, but I just don't know. Good write :) |
by Natalie
I loved this Jessy! It had a really good meaning to it. And the answer to those questions might never be answered. You did a fantastic job on this one. It was more than great! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by PygmyPuff
This is a great set of questions, but its not a great "poem". I mean that in a nice way. Perhaps you should try and add a metaphore to something else, it will add depth to the poem. |
Another great poem... very strong points and very to the point. |