The Stunning Flower [Haiku]

You just painted like, the PERFECT image of a beautiful flower in the wind. Brilliant =)

If you want to improve your haiku (this is something I learned recently and have been trying to do) you should try to omit unnecessary words like 'the' 'a' 'oh' and stick to nouns, adjectives, and verbs. I'd even avoid conjunctions. Tradtitional Haiku (apparently) should try to pack as much as they can into the syllables given, using unnecessary words is considered a waste of syllables.

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Wow, again nice haiku. ur good at those. u get a lot into such a short thing!

Very short and sweet.