Hmm.. Beautiful?.. that's only 3 syllables...

Hehe.. okay then.. :P i was doing it like be-a-u-ti-ful.. anyway, ill go change that now! lol..

This is excellent...Haiku's tend to be a bit dull, due to their size, but this has life. I gave it a {5/5}

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I'm not used to reading haiku, but I liked yours, the title is amazing.

Good job! 5/5

Im not use to seeing things that short but non the less it was good keep it up 5.5

So cute! This is awesome :D

Flowers are beautiful. And so is this haiku. Very nice Jessy =P 5/5

`Taleee xx

Love these poems. :) Short, sweet, amazing. Takes talent.

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I thought it was good, althoug Haiku's arent my type of poem, this was really good, keep writing

Very short and sweet.

Wow, again nice haiku. ur good at those. u get a lot into such a short thing!

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
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If you want to improve your haiku (this is something I learned recently and have been trying to do) you should try to omit unnecessary words like 'the' 'a' 'oh' and stick to nouns, adjectives, and verbs. I'd even avoid conjunctions. Tradtitional Haiku (apparently) should try to pack as much as they can into the syllables given, using unnecessary words is considered a waste of syllables.

You just painted like, the PERFECT image of a beautiful flower in the wind. Brilliant =)