Just because other girl seem to be better,
doesn't mean I'm bad,
Just because I'm not always happy,
I am other things than sad

i could totally relate myself with this stanza, this is just so beautifully written and its a fact which i go thro in my life every now and then,
very good poem dear

all the best and take care
5/5

You did really good on that! the last paragraph was really awesome *thanks for joining in my contest i appreciate it it was so hard you were so close to runner up! I was looking for the poem you entered "born to rock" you gotta put that on here i loved it ne way great job 5/5

KurMiT

Good job, be who you are. You may want to double check the poem for some errors.

What a great message ... to be happy with who you are and not to change for others. Wonderful insight. Nice job.

It was great, i can definitely relate to this... but this line
I doesn't make me any worse.

Should I be " it " ? i was kind of confused! but other then that, it was greattt keep it up hun

But this is me, take it or leave it.

^That was a great ending to a great poem!! You show such self-confidence in this poem.. which is refreshing and consoling. It's good to see a girl with a positive self image in today's world! I truly enjoyed reading this piece!!
-Kristy (Krissey)

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Gr8 work again. i can relate. i wish people cood just except us for how we really are. loved it 5/5

I can so relate to this poem, it was wonderful, thanks for entering my contest and may God bless

This Poem tells me allot about you it shows that u are who you want to be and nobody in the world can change that. That was great and truely never change.Thanks for he comment

Well, for starters, for Norwegian being your first language, your English is amazing. Secondly, this is a truly inspirational poem. There are many people out there who would do well to read it. Your honesty, and your heart shine through. Well done on a fantastic poem. xx

This is a good poem everyone should think like that to bad they don't right well... holla at my poems check them out and rate

Loved it so much. 5/5

This is wonderful. You have written a terrific poem. 5/5

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Letty

Hey well done! Great messange, that you managed to get through in your poem
LOVe

Very great poem..keep writting and have fun. 5/5 please comment and rate my poems!!!! ~SUICIDE~

Great poem... and i can really relate to it.

well done!

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Jacs
xxxx