Comments : The Pain Of Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    Omg, I love this poem, and I know exactly how you feel. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    I love it.
    it sounds like it could be a rap or sumthink
    i love love love it
    keep writing gurl

  • 18 years ago

    by MudkipzPlx

    Nicely Done if we do say so ourselves. :)

    Take Care: MPKKKAE.

  • 18 years ago

    by MudkipzPlx

    Nicely Done if we do say so ourselves. :)

    Take Care: MPKKKAE.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jec

    I like reading your poems to :)

    Love Jec x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Darling

    Hey i checked out ur poems when u left me a comment and found that ur great at writing poems keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by mariah

    I like this poem...it expresses alot of what i couldn't put in words...its good!!

    ~@mariah~@

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    Wow i like this one alot
    your one of my fab wrighter
    i love them all
    your great
    keep wrighting
    your friend
    Lana

  • Heya great poems!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BittersweetDecay

    It's really nice...and u have great ideas...i think u should make the verses a bit longer so that the rhyme will be exposed better.Anyway,keep writing however u want..it was just a sugestion (thx 4 ur comment) 5/5..Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey...I really enjoyed this poem and I know how you feel. You are a good writer, keep it up. Thank you for the comments.

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by BJ Algard

    Wow, its really sad, and good, you realy let it all out and it shows

  • 18 years ago

    by Tru

    Very well writtin. You got me as a reader now. keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LaurenLiz

    Hey,
    I really like this one too!!! All of your poems are really great!!!! Yah i do know what you mean about finding it hard to be happy but writing helps let things out i think. thanks again for your comment! I love this peom...especailly beacuse i can understand it...and im sure you know what i mean. Keep on writing...youre awesome!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by FaIlInGattemptsFoRhappiness

    Hey. Thank you very much for commenting my one poem. I really appreciated it. I just wanted you to know that i love this poem you wrote and the part that i love the most is
    "I will die here right now
    just to let you know
    I was dead to begin with
    you just didnt see
    the pain in me". That part was the best! i can really relate. Keep on writing!
    Brooke (FaIlInGattemptsFoRhappiness)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow, i loved this. You have a real talent. Keep writing and stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by Faye

    Wow. That is awesome. I think we do have a lot in common.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlackOctober

    You are by far the best writter!!!!!I love yur poetry, it explains how i feel. um well thank you for the comment.Please keep writting i love ur poems.
    lenzzzeeee

  • Im amazed.. all i an say is beautifually written!!!

    well done
    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by { The Jesster }

    Wow...your really good! This one is fab!
    Thanks for the comment by the way!

    Jessie