Hey, this is really touching, i really like it, its really nice

That is so sad n heartfelt ,very touching.

HUn, this was great!! n btw thanz 4 commenting on my poems! Life can b pretty tough at times but i could not imagine life without mu mum so i cnt really even relate to how u feel. i hope in the future things get better 4 u!! if u ever need to talk uno im here!! cya beautiful xoxo

Sad but still lovely...
Flows well and i like the style you wrote it with...
I cant say much to describe the emotion in it..
Its heartfelt 5/5 :D

This is a amazing poem it mad tears start to fill my eyes for it made me see the things I take for granted that my moms still does for me sorry for ur lose 5/5

Great poem!!!!! Beautiful!! just
Mummy y dd u leave me?
use why not y and did not dd, lol using y just doesn't do the poem justice and i think using punctuation! It really improves a poem> But other then that it was great!!!!!

Aww, this is very sweet. it makes me think of this innocent lil kid who does nothing but wonder why her mother is gone and has not a care in the world except what she's looking at this very moment . . .
it also has a heart-breaking sadness behind it that you feel when you look at the words long enough . . .
very nice, Torn! 5/5!
btw, thanx for the comment!

Aww that's sad losingsomeone. Hope you get over it. 5/5
-Kakashi

It is sad but I don't have a mum so I can understand. My mum is alive but she refuses to know me so yeh i'm getting over it now. Hope you are ok hun. Take care :)

I know how would u feel without your mom. Because when my mom goes somewhere for few days. I don't like at home or phone my mom come back.
keep smile
you are good writer.

Omg!! am really sorry for i, i do love this poem, its just soo touchin, has a great mesage and flows sooo good, excellent!!!

Awwwwww thats so sad i jad tears in my eyes!!! keep writing

That was so sad, very moving. 5/5

Omg! this is so heartbreaking! it really made me cry... espeically this stanza
"Mummy daddy always says
Your mummy wanted to go to heaven thats why she left
I want to go to heaven but daddy wont let me
Why wont he let me go?
Why wont he let me be with you?"

that stanza really toched me...
take care..
luv,
haya 3gab =]

Sweetie,I`m a mom,trust me cleaning your room and such things really don`t matter to us having your love is what really counts and I`m sure your mom knew she had yours! great poem,if you ever need mom type advice I`m here.

Wow this is soo soo soo sad i hope this never happened i really hope it didnt if it did im sry but this poem holds lots of meaning and it is very well done good job:d

keenan

This is a pretty good poem. 4/5 from me. its so sad tho =[ but still good.