Nice poem!!!
good luck

Aww thats so sad but somehow sweet lol its so nice i love the way u ended it a lovely phrase you made up i loved it keep the good work up hun xoxroxyxox RKS rules lol 5/5

Good job, rythms and had meaning, two important things about poetry

I liked Thiz poem rite hure 5/5

Wow this is really good, yea i could never do any kind of poetry like this this is pretty cool~loves britt

ps thanks for rating mine

Great work I love the poems
love ya
Avril xoxo

Thats really nice as well, you deserve someon nice as u sound realy nice especially in poetry its genuine. 5/5 xxtake carexx