Comments : I Can Be

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Oooh, Wow. Deep. This could defintely be related to alot of lives, stereotypical meanings, and as well people trying to pretend what they are not. I loved it... and it flowed nicely. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "I can be the perfect girl
    Who everyone wants to be
    She is sweet and kind to everyone
    Her spirit is wild and free"

    I think everyone can relate to this. I think everyone imagines being the perfect girl that everyone's jealous of. I know I do. I loved this poem! Especially this stanza!
    xoxo