by Lu Jun 9, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
You have been hidden in the darkness of my womb |
by RuFuS
WOw... i really like ure poem, inside on the baby in the womb...i reallly like it. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Oh my dear twin...this is such a beautiful poem, written straight from your loving heart. |
by MissAlotta
Aww.. so beautifully done and meaningful. I loved your bright emotion and outstanding flow. Amazing write! 5/5 xoxChristina |
by Natalie
Oh my gosh! This was so good. I really liked the last stanza. Everything flowed so well in this piece. It was more than great. Keep it up! 5/5 |
Awesome. I'm one of those people that doesn't want to have children, but reading this totally brings to mind the connection that people have to their children that they don't have with anyone else. Beautifully written. |