What a wonderful write... A great dedication. Your words are nicely chosen. Diana picked out the flow, which I also thought was amazing just like your other work! A very good write Luanne!

That is the sweetest poem I have read, you are a wonderful mom, so I know they'll grow up beautifully

Aww Luanne this was beautiful your boys are surely glad to have you as a mother! You've described a mothers feelings very well in this poem and it was a sweet dedication to them both!
I loved it as I do all your poems! The pleasure was mine :-)

Luanne, what a beautiful dedication, from mother to her son, so beautiful expressive emotion, well done!

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Ahh the contest that got 3rd in my contest. it was so amazing. i loved the detail. u have 2 understand i wanted 2 give u 2nd, but it was a hard decision. u are an excellent writer. 5/5

Awesome. I'm one of those people that doesn't want to have children, but reading this totally brings to mind the connection that people have to their children that they don't have with anyone else. Beautifully written.

Oh my gosh! This was so good. I really liked the last stanza. Everything flowed so well in this piece. It was more than great. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Aww.. so beautifully done and meaningful. I loved your bright emotion and outstanding flow. Amazing write! 5/5 xoxChristina

Oh my dear twin...this is such a beautiful poem, written straight from your loving heart.
Those boys are lucky to have a mother as wonderful as you are.
Take care~Holly

WOw... i really like ure poem, inside on the baby in the womb...i reallly like it.