Monsoon of love (haiku)

by Melissa   Jun 9, 2006


God showers mankind
drenching our tart budded tongues
with holy water

*Haiku: a Japanese verse with three unrhymed lines of 5, 7, 5, syllable count

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Great! Fantastic symbolism while remaining in the traditional confines of the haiku format.

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I really like the choice of words used here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I absolutely adored the title, it added much to poem. A beautiful Haiku Melissa, ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Beautiful Haiku Melissa... Wonderfully done!

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