A very nice haiku. You picked your words really well. Awesome job! Keep it up. 5/5

`Taleee xx

Beautiful Haiku Melissa... Wonderfully done!

I absolutely adored the title, it added much to poem. A beautiful Haiku Melissa, ^_^

I really like the choice of words used here.

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Great! Fantastic symbolism while remaining in the traditional confines of the haiku format.