I absolutely love this poem. It's just so real, I guess. I really like it. Nice work!

I loved this poem. The phrases are so different from what i'm accustomed to seeing. Goodbye isn't always forever... 5/5

Aww. so sentimental and sweet. thnks for the comment!

Great poem, thanks for the awsome comment. And yea i think you are right about the whole push and shove, but i needed the shove to rhyme. lol. 5/5 by the way.